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.....I actually made a little progress on a few things today. :-)

.....I unburied the hammered dulcimer and worked a little on tuning it. It's going to be a little while though. It has been closeted for a while. I suspect that it will not 'settle' for a couple of days as it acclimatizes to being actually played and NOT being in its case. I was chasing strings all over the place. As I tuned a pair and moved on to set it against the next, I would finish that second one just to find that it did not ring true to the first one. Part of it is me having to re-figure out what I'm doing, I'm sure.

.....It was a pleasure to hear the strings being struck with the hammers though. I could listen simply to the notes being struck and think it wondrous music. :-) Which I found myself doing way too often. :-)

.....Pulled out the tiny loom I borrowed from TBT and re-figured out how to RE-start the card weaving. Finally made it to a point where I was getting the tension to an acceptable level (where the shuttle thread could no longer be seen :-)). I think I'll bring that with me to work on this evening at Fight Practice.

.....Went out to have lunch with Gwen over on the West side of Bremerton. I'm working on trying to convince someone from Dragon's Laire to go out for the Kingdom Arts and Sciences Championship sometime. I think that Mistess Gwen has a repertoire that could make the grade. Now just have to convince her to do it. :-)

.....Worked on a second stanza for my epic. Definitely needs some work, but will record it here for future effort:

With skillful fingers a great spell she wove.
Her hands moved in an intricate life dance,
As faster and still faster did they rove.
A blur of flesh on this cloth of romance.

Arose then images of elegance,
From wafting colours floating in the air.
The specters of high kings did they enhance,
As willing souls allowed them to ensnare.

All that was ill of health was then laid bare.

.....Time to get cleaned up and ready for Fight Practice. It will be interesting to see how many make it there tonight. I suppose it could go either way: not many people because they are all involved in holiday pursuits, or a lot of people because they are all on vacation and looking for something to keep them entertained. :-)

.....O.K. enough delay. Time to roll...

.....Aaron / Arontius.
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.....Remember that long laundry list of 'stuff' I WAS going to get done today? Didn't happen. Not a single thing. Instead I ended up reading Tolkien's Lay of Beren and Luthien. Which inspired me to pick up and read some of my favorite parts of Edmund Spenser's 'The Faerie Queene'.

.....Shakespeare is pretty much considered the gold standard of Elizabethan poetry and prose by the modern educational establishment. You say 'William Shakespeare' to random individuals at Tacoma Mall and, if you didn't get arrested for being insane first, very nearly all of them could tell you who this person was and why they were famous.

.....But mention Edmund Spenser? Not so much so. Which is something of a pity. Don't get me wrong, reading Shakespeare (at least unedited Shakespeare :-)) is good for the mind and soul. But Spenser has a style and depth that Shakespeare doesn't have. Shakespeare CAN write Arthurian romance, but his style is more 'dramatic' than it is 'romantic', so it doesn't have the same kind of life that breathes in The Faerie Queene.

.....Although it sounds like I'm complaining when I really am not. It's like comparing milk chocolate made with cocao from Brazil and milk chocolate made with cocao from India. There might be differences to the chocolate expert, but to most it will still be a bite of CHOCOLATE! :-)

.....What all this IS doing though is inspiring me towards writing something a bit more on an epic scale (meaning epic as in style and length, without claiming epic as a measure of superiority :-)). Spenser wrote The Faerie Queene in iambic pentameter, but with a rhyme scheme of ABAB BCBC C. That's pretty tight. And in nine lines. Now imagine trying to carry that through an entire story. Definitely a much different mindset will be needed to pull something like that together versus individual sonnets.

.....Here's my start though, the first stanza. It will take a while to finish, but I'm hoping that once I roll into the pattern it'll start coming along a little faster:

From Eastern lands she came on fier'y steed.
The stars proclaiming her as pro - phet sent.
Built on a bedrock of renown in deed,
A Queene from lands afar would not be pent.

The fabric of this land of Norse was rent,
By tales forged in fire from our heros hands.
Swords of strength were left wheresoe'er she went,
As altars of rev'rence in all these lands,

As they are gathered into tight strong bands.

.....Give you half a guess as to whom the subject is. :-)

.....Aaron / Arontius.

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